Nooo, it's nice and clear, especially for our level

It was very instructive at my level of French, and clearly showed the use of the "imperfect"

Surely you should use apporter, not emmener 

write down all the imparfait verbs

J'aime bien votre site. J'apprends depuis longtemps et cela m'a beaucoup aidé.

Merci! :)

The story is written in the imparfait which is an important tense to know.